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Universidad Pedagógica Experimental Libertador
Instituto Pedagógico Experimental Rafael Alberto Escobar Lara
Departamento de Inglés
Reading and Writing I
Members:
Castillo Paola
Castillo Stella
Díaz Julián
Rivas Enrique

Internet as a Limitation for Learning in High School

The last decades has been of evolution, each day our society is improving thanks to technologic advances, but do they work for learning? Everyday technology makes life easier; nowadays there is an invention for almost all people needs. Internet for example, there are many utilities that can make learning process funnier and more entertaining. Also, there can be find a great variety of information which students can use for their researches. But what happens when students use this information improperly? A very important issue is that high school students can take advantage of internet to avoid their homework, by plagiarizing information, copying it and adding some ideas or rewriting it which restricts their learning process,

Advantages and disavantages of tecnology in education

Since the begining of the world the man have been searching for evolution, but does it work for education?
Everyday tecnology makes life easier, nowdays we have an item for almost all our needs, the computer for example, we can find many educational interactive programmes to work with and professor cannot avoid, the opportunity of using them on their classes in order to make them more interesting and interactive since young generations are attracted to it, so they find the classes funnier, more entertaining and they feel more confortable about it.
But what about those who are not involved in these new trends?For them, learning through interactive programmes is not that easy, if the do not understand how to work with them, they will not be motivated in the class and the learning proccess will fail.

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