domingo, 18 de febrero de 2007

TRANSITION AND TRAUMA

since the man is born, it is forced to cross by several educational stages that are going to help it in the future, introducing itself in the labor field, but in the period of transition of these stages, specially in the transition from high school to the university, exist certain aspects that can cause a strong impression to any student therefore, it can affect the academic yield in students. Some of the main aspects that affect the student lives are the forms of evaluation and the different ways of study used at these two different levels, due to this situation, students have to know that there are changes they can go through in the stage of transition between high school and the university with the purpose of having a better adaptation to their new student life style.
According to Gutiérrez (2004) in the first levels of education, it is thought that knowledge is such an unchangeable thing and what books say is the only truth students need to know, in addition it is tended to evaluate the repetition of concepts and there are no questions about where the knowledge comes from and what its importance is. It is a common situation that students in high school normally memorize, the subject's theory in order to only approve an exam and later they forget every thing they have memorized, this is not a positive point when they have to analyse different theories and besides that, to state a position based on arguments like papers, historical references etc, it means that they must justify their point of view with real evidences.
Here is presented another clear example of the differences between both levels of education, it was given by Gocsik (2005): “One of the first things you'll discover as a college student is that writing in college is different from writing in high school. Certainly a lot of what your high school writing teachers taught you will be useful to you as you approach writing in college”. Indeed, writing is an educational strategy to evaluate, that should be applied in high school, but unfortunately that is not a reality in Venezuela, as a result, when venezuelan students get into the university they do not know how to write not even an essay, that fact becomes in a big shock for them that can even cause university abandonment, a good solution for this current problem could be to offer introductory courses that can help students to overcome those academic obstacles previously mentioned.
Teixeira. A, chief of counseling and developmental human department in Universidad Católica Andrés Bello quoted by Tabuas. M, said that in high school pupils do not pay enough attention to their responsibilities and even though they approve the subjects, but at the university they need to make a different effort because at college they have to cover more requirements and they need to be more independent at searching knowledge and in the same position professors at college are more like kind of guides, it means that professors are not the only ones that knows everything, students have to take place in the process of apprenticeship and the develop of knowledge, at this stage they has to become in real researchers of their specialty.
In simpler terms, at the beginning of their university career the students usually underestimate the pressure that this environment can causes them, and this is one of the principal reason that can produce them a shock when they reach this stage so, the best thing to avoid this trauma is to look for the suitable aid which would be into the hands of a university counsellor in other words, students need to have orientation before the reach the university level with the intention that they can have a good adaptation in the university

8 comentarios:

Fernando dijo...

Hi my brother!
You have a wonderful idea. Your thesis statement is clear and specific enough. But you have to be careful with spelling and punctuation marks. Remerber that your supporting paragraphs have to be united, and all of them have to make reference to your thesis.
I am sure you can do a great job brother, keep on like this.

Silvia Montenegro dijo...

Hi koyak! I liked your essay. Everything you've said is true! The only thing I have to say is that, you should shortten up your sentences! Use periods instead of so many colons. In that way, you can separate your ideas! Also, just say what you really want to say! Get to the point, in order to keep your main idea!
Well, that's it. The rest is very good! good luck!
Kisses!

vanessa baena dijo...

hi en, i liked your topic, be careful with spelling, but that's an interesting essay it has information that is according with us.

Stephanie dijo...

As I told you this is a really really interesting topic because this is something we all have to fece at the beginning of the university; but, you have to be careful with spelling and punctuation marks as fernando told you; Moreover, I don't know if I'm wrong but there is something missing in your thesis statement, I mean, It seems like a topic sentence. The rest of your essay is fine, you have good ideas.Congrats mi negro!!

Prof. Manuel Adrian Arrioja dijo...

Enrique, I am just going to add one observation to the accurate comments of your classmates.
According to your thesis statement, you have to explain how "orientation" BEFORE college can help the student succeed in the university. I don't see this in every paragraph of your essay.

Didi dijo...

Dear Henry:
I think your topic is marvellous, and the way you deal with it is fine. But your problems are basically related to essay construction and punctuation marks.

pokistaurisano dijo...

hi enrique... your essay is amazing..
i really liked , it sorpresed me.
it is complete and really interesting because every one of us go through that, once in our lives.
you did a great job.
congratulations

pokistaurisano dijo...

hi enrique... congratulations you did agerat job
actually you sorprised me. i liked because the topic is interesting and is something everyone of us go throught that once in our lives.